Esther Sylvester

Hello Firefly! Welcome to YWS! Here is Esther for a review. What I am going to do is comment on your plot flow, your characters, and nitpick (not grammatical btw)problems ...

Welcome, Firefly! It seems that we have a lot in common. Firefly happens to be one of my favorite TV shows, and I enjoy science fiction and fantasy too! Also, ...

Author's note: This is a little poem I thought of when I was riding in the car. I wrote it down because I'm sure everyone has had a bad meatloaf! ...

Hi there! I am sorry for taking so long to review; I have been busy. FIRST OFF: Wow, I wish I had read this sooner. It was really good and ...

Hey there! I am here for a review, as requested. I apologize for taking so long. FIRST OFF: Well, you say this is going to be a novel in three ...

I know that this is for a dialogue only contest, just to say that before I start. REVIEW: Just to get this off of my chest: You could have cursed ...

Wow, thank you very much. I will keep these thoughts in mind, thank you.

Author's note: This is a poem I have written for a contest. It also happens to be the first actual poem I have ever written. Any advice is welcome, although ...

Hey Squirrely! Really good job here! This was great. I simply cannot wait for more. Unfortunately, everything that has needed to be said has already been said. But I'm going ...

Hi! This is Esther Sylvester here for a review! First off This was very good! You captured the main character's frustrations wonderfully. She is different than the average "heroine", and ...

Thank you so much guys! I have gone through and edited the work so far. It looks a lot better now, thank you.

Okey doke! Shubhi and Skins, your reviews are completed. And it was my pleasure, I really must say.

Hey Shubhi! Here to review as requested. Now, here is the question: Is this a persuasive essay for the magazine or just an article? Just asking so I can judge ...

Hey Skins! I would like some awesomeness! And it's true. Thank you so much for reviewing my stuff so far. If it isn't too much trouble, I would appreciate you ...

AUTHOR'S NOTE : This is the sixth chapter of my romance novel. It's a little long and possibly very rough, but I would greatly appreciate your time and reviews. For ...